Journie, your essay was awesome. I loved the first paragraph because I could picture what was happening to that girl and how you held her in your arms. I wanted to jump in there and help that girl to. You did very well with this writing.
Journie, your essay was awesome. I loved the first paragraph because I could picture what was happening to that girl and how you held her in your arms. I wanted to jump in there and help that girl to. You did very well with this writing.
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